So Ja...congratulations on getting that up! I would like advise on a couple of things. one is your words. Some of them need to be on the screen for longer, especially at the end I didn't get to read it it was so quick. And also some come on in the middle behind the big word, so can't really see those either. The second thing is the mess on the floor in the background. don't mind me..but it would look better if it wasn't there. Chuck it all on the bed while you video. Have you watched it yourself and...